I see some patchy spots but I wanted any opinions or advice before I do another layer.
I would bring the front down further.
Yep - bring the front forward but more sparsely
I couldn’t manage to figure out how to get it much further but this is what I ended up with. I agree that it looks too far back but I think I may have chosen the wrong hairline for him.
I think it looks good but could you maybe add so more “wispy” hairs around the front and in the “receded” area?? Just a suggestion.